03 January 2007

Planetians 2

however things were not smooth sailing. we defied nature and the galaxy distorts. Truth distorts. the injuries from the clash were unbearable and as we cliff hang in the grey area, time permitted illusions and doubts. You controlled the high and low of my emotional tides, the light and darkness of my life. There wasn't a moment of monotony felt and hopes were as slim as seeing a lunar eclipse in a cloudy pluviosity. Your departure was adrupt and illogical, leaving me in despair and misery. After long there seem no room for reconciliation. Now that you are back on track orbiting, the light years between seem like a comfortable cushion after all. =]

Alas, we lived happily ever after seperately...

7 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

did u lift ur entries frm sum other website? dey look quite familiar. =/

1/05/2007 10:14 pm  
Blogger PHiL said...

i guess we are just smart people expressing the pain of love the same way. heh ;)

1/06/2007 12:35 am  
Blogger PHiL said...

oh! and its kinda personal experience. but all's good and over the MOON!!! hahaha

1/06/2007 12:54 am  
Blogger mq said...

glad to see that =)

1/06/2007 10:04 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi Phil,

I believe u do not get what i am trying to say. If u copy & paste your entries from sum other weblinks, pls have at least the basic courtesy to acknowledge the content provider. U did add in a phrases of your own but when i look further into ur entries did i realise that some of ur entries are lifted. It really belittle writers of varying levels of quality and professionalism.

Twistedtaboo.blog

1/06/2007 11:34 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hmm, i think it is inevitable for one to be influenced by the works one has read. even then, using the imagery of planets or things of a hyperbolic nature when talking about the silly little thing called love is not entirely uncommon, no?

1/07/2007 12:27 am  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi anonymous,

I have to agree with it. However, when one copy and paste almost word for word for almost every other entry, it leads to query. This is made even more dubious when Phil uses his own words for some parts that are not lifted from the original source.

Twistedtaboo.blog

1/07/2007 1:29 am  

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